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Cover Page- Bad BitsWhat could I have done better on the cover page? well, I do think that the cover page is a little bit over- edited so looks a little bit fake and too edited. Olivia's (the model) face is also rather shiny as it was a sunny day when the picture was taken so I could have smoothen out her skin and gotten rid of the shine. I should also have made a boarder around the edge of the pages as on this white background, you cannot really see where the magazine finishes and the website starts. overall, I think that for my preliminary task, this wasn't a bad effort and i'm sure that I will improve on the way to making the final Music magazine at the end of the year. Cover Page- Good BitsI believe that I used the right text colours and had the right sort of idea using the burn tool to emphasise the cover lines. I also like that the Model looks happy and I like the new depth of the Clarendon college logo created by said burn tool. I also like the white boarder on the cover page. Contents Page- Bad BitsI also think that my contents page is a little bit too over-edited and that how daunting the stairs are could have been emphasised in a more subtle way other than going overboard on the burn tool. I don't like how added on the top the hexagon looks. It looks as though I have literally used the shape tool and then put text over it ( which is what i did) however, I could have either smudged or blurred around it to make it look better. Contents Page- Good BitsI like that the yellow of the writing stands out against the photo background and I all like the white boarder around this page. Another thing I think I did well with the contents page wad the positioning of the camera when I was taking the picture, making the stairs look very daunting.
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Sasha BloreI'm just a random 17 year old girl Originally from Luton, England with an irresistible passion for anything creative, fun and inspiring.
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